Gerunds and Nounised Verbs

A gerund is a verb that ends in –ing and functions as a noun.  For example:

Learning          >        Learning is fun.

In this sentence, “learning” is a thing.  Thus, as you know, it’s a noun.

It’s easy to confuse a gerund with the present continuous tense of a verb, because the present continuous tense includes an –ing participle:  “Marvin is learning to dance.”  Simply ask yourself if the –ing word is an action word or a thing.  If it’s a thing, you’ve got yourself a gerund.

Gerunds are problematic because they can render your writing passive.  Remember, verbs are strong words, and words of action:  they are the strongest words in a sentence.  If you turn them into nouns, you make them weaker and more boring.  Consider the following example:

Learning is fun.  Writing, however, is no fun at all.  Figuring out what you need to say is difficult, and trying to produce it is even worse.

Now consider this version:

It’s fun to learn.  It’s no fun at all, however, to write.  It’s difficult to figure out what you need to say, and it’s even worse to try to produce it.

You can see that the second version is stronger and more immediate.

Gerunds are not evil:  there’s no need to eradicate them from your essays completely.  Try, however, to use them only when no other form of the verb will do:  if you can fiddle around with sentence a little and use an infinitive or an active form instead, do that.

Another very common form of “nounised” (I made that word up) verb is the –tion/-sion construction:  manipulation, persuasion, proclamation – you get the idea.  These forms, too, sap your sentences of vitality.  You can usually spot the –tion form because it comes preceded by a

verb that could easily be cut if you made the –tion word into a verb in its own right.  For example:

She used (verb that could easily be cut) manipulation (nounised verb) on him.

That sentence is neither very immediate nor very exciting.  How about:

She manipulated him.

That’s more like it!  Turning that nounised verb back into the verb it came from has given the

sentence impact and vividity.  You will notice that this –tion word came with an unnecessary preposition (on).  In fact, that’s often the case with these words, and it’s a good way to spot them.

Where you can, try to use your verbs as verbs (even in infinitive forms) rather than turning them into nouns.  This will make your sentences strong and effective.

Practical Solutions:

Go through your writing looking for words ending in “ing.” When you find one, check to see if it is next to an “is.”  If so, it’s a present continuous.  If it’s not, it’s probably a gerund.  See if you can turn it back into a verb.

When you see a –tion/-sion word, check if it’s accompanied followed by a preposition. If so, you can probably turn it into a verb in its own right.

Where possible, try to use verbs as verbs. Remember that verbs are the strongest words in your sentences, so turning them into nouns weakens the sentences.

Be Aware of These:

Sometimes a gerund really is the best choice. Feel free to go with it if other verb forms seem to you to weaken the sentence.

Often in order to remove a gerund a –tion word you will have to move elements of your sentence around. At first this may take time and not seem worth it.  You will notice, however, that doing so almost always improves the sentence, and so in fact is worth it.

Virtually no one knows what a gerund is anymore, so if you know and use that knowledge, people will be impressed.

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